The story is about a little girl who is diagnosed with cancer and taken to Baltimore, MD to be treated by a specialist. While the girl is resting there is a fight between good (granmother) and evil (demonic entity). The girl dies but she is protected and saved by the spirit of her grandmother and she goes to Heaven with her grandmother.
I liked the idea for the story. The fight between good and evil is always a good story plot, because it can be done in so many ways. I liked "She puts on the Full Armor of God, the Breastplate of Righteousness, Belt of Truth, Shoes of Peace, Shield of Faith, Helmet of Salvation, and Sword of the Spirit" because it was good imagery.
This story was rushed. It could have been detailed more to get a better feeling for the story. I wanted to know a specific, epic example of how Dr. Brodie has saved lives before. I want to know not only how the parents feel about their daughter having a terminal illness but how does the girl feel about knowing she could die? What had she been through before coming to Baltimore?
The ending was one line, and I was hoping to see a vivid image of the daughter ascending to Heaven with her grandmother.
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