Sunday, December 5, 2010

Tara's response to Faith

I think this is a good poem, it doesn't really give me what Mr. Kizzier likes to call a poetic moment. I think the closest line to the moment was "Truth was locked in the cellar." I think in the beginning you are talking about being in a church, maybe when you were baptized because you say "My mind was fixed when i was young." This line is actually kind of confusing, are you saying that you were born in favor of the devil. I definately need to hear more to completely comprehend how this ends, im stuck between two different things; that truth was that you belonged in hell or you worshiped the devil or that you were talking about seeing other people worship the devil.

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