This poem sounds like it's about a relationship gone sour from his girlfriend cheating on him...maybe she cheated on him in his own bed: "Its funny how you turned my bed into the most uncomfortable place I’ve ever been."
I like the last stanza that says "Then you finally let go But now it’s my head Like it’s stuck in a tire And you keep spinning it around Every once in a while" because it is a good metaphor to explain your confusion and emotions.
I felt like it could have been longer. This author tends to write short, simple and to the point poems. I'd like to see something longer with more imagery. I think it would make it twice as good.
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