Tara's Response to Once In a While

The author has a very creative mind. What i get from this poem is that somehow his own bed got dirty, my guess is because his girlfriend cheated on him in it, or something terrible happened in it. In the end it says "That you finally let go." Which leads me to believe that it was indeed a relationship because according to the end its stuck in his head like he can't believe that it actually happened to him. "It clinched my muscles and left them cold." This is my favorite line and i think this is the poetic moment , but I think you need more detail because right after that you give your main idea away. I want to hear more about the hurt and pain you went through, poems usually come from the heart i know if it was actually something the poet went through he could say more.