heidi's response to Priscilla's story

“The Glass Box” is a very engaging story that makes the reader want to keep reading. Both the character of Shaundra and of Dr. Strohlman are interesting and realistically developed, making it difficult not to want to know more about them. The description of the setting is appealing and prepares the reader for something he/she might not be expecting, such as the quirky and unorthodox methods of the doctor. In terms of suggestions, the background on Shaundra could probably be worked into the progression of the story a bit more rather than just simply telling the reader the information through narration. There seems to be a lot of potential with this story, and it would be worth continuing.