“Resurrection”
This story does a good job of jumping right into the action and quickly engaging the reader. Description and dialogue move the story along and seem to progress naturally. The info given keeps the reader interested and makes you want to keep reading to find out what happens. It’s clearly just the beginning of a larger story, so this may not be significant; however, I can’t say as I feel like I have much of an attachment to the protagonist, Ashley, even though you do suggest that she’s a sympathetic character. Also, it’s not clear who Miles Ronald is, even though he apparently has strong ties to Ashley’s family.
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