Lena's review "Don’t call it a comeback" by Josh Nuckolls

The story was good but predictable when Danny brings his son’s teddy bear with him and put the diamond in it. In “ Danny was familiar and accustomed to the hard way, and had Natasha and the kids not been there Danny probably would have chosen the hard way in a heartbeat and broken Oscars but in this situation it wasn’t the right thing to do so Danny step aside.” I like the description of his past habit and having a family persuaded him to be nonviolent in financial situations. I like the dialogue between the girlfriend and Danny because she knows he is going back to his old ways and worried he will get hurt. Could continue more about his past to lead up to the present outcome .