Takira's Response to Lena's Poem

Intoxication by Nature is about a woman’s love for nature, Mother Nature. Bad Dream is about losing a close friend to Cancer. I really liked both of your poems. Both were really good and had me wanting more. I loved Intoxication by Nature because I can relate to the lines. I loved the imagery and metaphors. It made the poem seem more real and personal. I loved the personification in the poem. Bad Dream was very touching. I couldn’t imagine what it would be like to lose someone you are so close to. I love the beginning. It kept me intrigued with every line. I don’t really have too much of a critique for you. Can’t wait to read more of your poems!