Takira's Response to Saira's Story

Your story was very interesting. I liked it a lot. I liked Ashley’s character because her brief story of her pass resembles many people I actually know. The story had a very emotional touch to it and made me feel for Ashley a little more than I did for her son. I am curious as to what would happen to her son. I would like to know if the family took care of him and how did he react to his mother’s death. My only critique is to maybe give more on what happens next because there was really no ending. It seemed to be more of the beginning to a story.