This poem is about someone who in intrigued with nature so much so that it gives him/her a "high" feeling.
I like the various imagery lines you use to emphasize how beautiful nature is. For example, you say, "Trembling leaves that shift and envelop my body." Also, I like that the nature is a female and that you give her characteristics and traits. However, you could have kept going more with giving Mother Nature more personal traits. I would have liked to see more of it.
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