Takira's Response to Liz's Story

I really enjoyed your story. I liked how you started it off with a dialogue. I liked the characters in the story. It reminded me of a perfect American family. I loved the interaction between the family and how they were all there for each other. The switch in the story when the car crash took place had me gasping because it felt like I was actually in the scene watching it happen as it was happening. It was very emotional and had me waiting to see what was going to happen. I ending was so sad to read and made me almost cry. The only thing I would have liked to know more about was Josie. Just a little more about her character would be great.