Takira's Response to Josh's Story

I liked your story. It was an easy read and realistic. I liked the part in the story where Danny put the diamond in the teddy bear for his wife. I thought it was a nice way of showing how Danny was prepared for the worst that could possibly happen due to his decision to go back to his old days. I also liked that he took his family out the house so that they would not see repo men were taking their things. The only problem I had with the story was that you gave your opinion about many of the characters as the writer instead of maybe having them be Danny’s opinion.