Melda's response to John Nuckolls "Don't call it a comeback"

I found it interesting how much you liked your character, even though he does some bad things. Also, I like how clear you made it as to who is talking in the story. For example, every time Danny spoke you stated clearly, "Danny speaks." On the other hand, I did not think the title suited the story very well. The title is "Don’t call it a Comeback," but I do not think the story is about a comeback…it is more about a desperate father who is trying to provide for him family.