Jim's 'response to Jeffrey's "Eight by Eight"

Eight by eight is a story about a bunch of FBI agents who don’t seem to get along so well. Their leader is a bit of a narcissist, so they are having problems despite the efforts of the rest of the crew. Jeffrey did a good job of giving each one of them a unique personality. There’s a lot of good believable dialogue here. I liked the way he kept building the tension between Kellin and Wade, and how Wade ended up figuring it out. I liked the visuals he gave too.