Andrew's poem "Poetry Queen" is about the narrator expressing his love to a girl he is with, assuming it is his girlfriend. He is making the girl feel comfortable to be in his presence and describers her appearance. He loves her so much that his love for her can not be measured. They were meant for each other. It is as if he and the girl were having a very strong intimate moment and words are being expressed to her that are so deep and she is a very beautiful girl.
Andrew's poem "Anytime is a Good Time" is about the narrator being tired of society. That there needs to be something interesting. The people in society is killing themselves. Maybe he is looking for a change in the world. Something that is better than the way life is now.
There is nothing I would change in these poems. They were beautiful and I can understand what he is saying through these poems. I feel like I can see what he sees. I encourage you to keep writing more poems. Your style is very interesting. Good Job!
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