Tara's Response to Treehuggers

Overall I think this story is funny, because i can kind of relate to it in a way. Me and my freinds sold strawberry dacquiries in the summer time on our street. Me and my one friend were underaged, but we didn't get caught and made lots of money. I think the whole jello shot idea is awesome, but I would charged the hippies more than $1. I think that it sucks that they got caught when Ethan was finally starting to make money. I guess he just didn't know who was in charge of the camp, and its sucks that the guy had to kick them out. I think i would of ended the story differently, like i would of had the guy call the police, but usually people go to jail for selling alcohol to minors, instead of the other way around. Sabrina you have a creative mind, but i think the story could of used some more conflict to make it more interesting.. Just a suggestion! I'll have more comments in class.