Jeffery's Story is about a FBI crew on a "Stake Out" to catch gangs, who are wanting to commit gang activity to control the city. The crew is describe with people with very special unique jobs. The story concludes with the FBI crew playing a psychological game with the criminals like a chess game and successfully capturing them.
I enjoyed the story and laugh at some of the dialouge. I loved how you described the characters and making Zedd this old fashion, highly-skilled, man and Kellin a young blonde man who relies only on technology. I like how you made the story like the A-Team and making the story a psychological chess game that ends with catching the criminals with a checkmate. Well done my friend.
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