Mary's review of Mark's story

It was as though the man, upon realizing that he shot the woman, was going to go up and commit suicide. I didn't quite get the "trigger" part but I guess this is what normally is exclusive to a gun. I thought the repetition added an artistic flavor, and kept this reader focused on the subject. I liked he emotional descriptions of the emotions of the character, and the description of "halo" around the woman--a sort of adoration or admiration for her. It was very interesting, read well and captivated this reader. Really cool!