Response:
This is a beautiful poem with wonderfully descriptive imagery that speaks of unrequited love, or that which cannot be obtained. At times I feel that you are talking about divine love, and at other times the love of a mother for her child. Yet you really make the reader feel the pain of not having those same, intense feelings of love returned. There is a sadness, a melancholy, a resignation and sense of settling for any kind of relationship just to be close to this person. You do leave the door open at the end as you hope this person will feel the same as you and you will wait patiently. I really enjoyed reading both of your poems. You have a natural talent.
Claudia Blaize
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