Sunday, September 27, 2009
Lena’s review for “The blame game” by Valerie Kessler
I like the news being the first introduction of the story. The description of the characters’’ voices in dialogue is really good in setting the emotional tone of the characters talking to each other. She didn’t pay attention to what she put on; appearance was not her main concern. “She grabbed her car keys off the peg board, and jutted for her minivan, almost forgetting to shut the front door behind her.” I Like Alice’s urgency overruling her normal responsibilities. I also like the ending that the whole time it was Sonya. You could include what type of trouble Elle gotten into to lead up to the murder of her parents. Maybe write a little more about the outcome from the ending.
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