Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Seth's Response to Becca's Poem "Reflections"

Filled with beautiftul metaphors that vividly describe a sunset, "Reflections" has superb imagery.
Although it is free verse poetry there is still a need for punctuation. Properly placed commas and periods will not only add emphasis on certain words but it will also make for a more pleasurable reading/listening experience. If a reader recognizes the punctuation and speaks accordingly the lyrical sound of the poem is improved.

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