Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Patrick's response to Lena's poems

Lena,
I really enjoyed reading the poems you submitted. I found both of them very emotionally driven and honest. I like how intoxication by nature rises and falls. And your word usage provides wonderful imagery for the reader. The word usage in "Bad Dream was also chosen wonderfully. I really liked the line about the willow tree and the vines. It was a very powerful line. I believe your poems possess a distinct human quality and i think that's great. Keep up the goo writing. I look forward to reading your next submission.

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