Takira's Response to Seth

I really enjoyed your story. It is a good example of how a ‘good and normal perfect family’ could be very dysfunctional and broken. This just shows that everyone has family problems behind doors. I loved all the characters in the story, especially the father. I loved the use of the Cher song that makes the neighbor questionable like Charles Sr because of the stereotype. I really enjoyed the story. The only thing I was a little confused by was which Charles you were talking about at times. My only suggestion is to specify Jr. or Sr. But I can’t wait to read more of your work.