Takira's Response to Katie

Your story was very interesting. I liked it. It had me speechless at the end because just like the town, I wouldn’t expect them to do what they did. You did a very good job in developing the characters in a way that would have the reader in shock like the people in the town the girls lived in. I liked the detail in the plan the girls came up with in such a short period of time. I don’t have too much of a critique besides maybe letting us know what happened when the town found out.