Lena's review for "Josie" by Liz Wenrich

“The squealing of the brakes was piercing, followed by the clanging of metal on metal. High pitched screams overpowered the sound of breaking glass and more bangs of collision. The screams were sharp and filled with terror.” This was a good description of the chaotic motion of the car accident. “The van hadn’t stopped spinning and Josie’s car-seat caught on underneath the front bumper of the car. She was shrieking in pain, being drug around with the front of the minivan.” This was good visual of the child car seat with Josie stuck under the car in front. You could specify more on the details of Josie’s death from the car accident.