Takira's Response to Adam

I absolutely LOVED your story! It reminds me of my family, except there are 16 grandchildren. It kept me laughing and wanting more. I liked the paragraph on page 5 (starting with “so we all got back into position like good boys and girls”) the best. It was hilarious and I could imagine what happened if I was there. You made the story realistic and fun to read. I also like “the look”. I can definitely relate to that because my cousins and I also do that when we are about to do something. I don’t really have too much of a critique. I would just like to know what the grandmother did with the picture.