Response to Reflections and Revolutions by Becca

Reflections by Becca
I thought this poem was very good. I really like the descriptions you made in the verses and how you made the sun and the reflections out to be almost human-like. I liked the description—the sun wrapping herself in a pale pink blanket. I don’t know why some of your verses are one worded and some aren’t? It just confused me but you probably have a reason for doing so.

Revolutions by Becca
I think the way you wrote this poem that you helped the reader visualize the scene very well. I also like the comparison of skyscrapers to great monsters. I thought that was interesting. At the end of the poem, the last three verses confused me. I don’t see the connection between those last three lines and the rest of the poem.