This poem is about colors that reflect during night-time in a pool of water.
I like that you use certain scenes to describe a situation rather than blatantly coming out with it. For example, you say, “On a liquid stage,” to illustrate that the colors are dancing in a body of water. Also, I like how you described the sun-setting by stating, “And as she sinks into her bed wrapping herself in a pale pink blanket.” You give the sun a character and habits. On the other hand, you could have described these colors more vividly and gave them more life. You said that they were beautiful, however, describe this beauty.
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