Lena's review for "Photogratastrophe" by Adam Kite

“What we weren’t expecting to see was my cousin JD with the biggest, stupidest smile I’ve ever seen and his finger shoved into Greg’s ear down to the first knuckle.” I like this visual of the family being silly and not being serious when pictures are being taking. “We were all seated in the living room each with our own pile of Christmas presents and wrapping paper slung across the floor.” I like this description of a typical family Christmas with presents and wrapping paper in each area of the kids on the floor. You could describe more about the main character’s hobbies to explain why he had been through a hundred photo shoots.