Takira's Response to Valarie

I loved your story. I was and still am surprised by the ending. I sat with my mouth wide open for a minute because I was so surprised. I liked the dialogue. It made the story feel more personal because I knew what the characters were actually saying and feeling. It was very interesting from the beginning to the end. It keeps me wanting more. I thought about what could happen next and if Elle ever got out of the mental institution, if Sonya ever confessed, did anyone get convicted for the crime, or was the case left unsolved. Although I really like the ending, it would be nice to know what happened to the girls. Overall I thought this was a great story and can’t wait to read more of your work.