Reflections is about the colors reflected in the water at nighttime. Revolutions is about being lost and confused in a big, busy city like New York.
I liked your poems. They were really good. I liked ‘Reflections’ the best. Your word choice in the poem was great especially the first stanza. It was very descriptive and imaginative. I liked both poems. I could feel the words of the lines you wrote. Each line implicated a different feeling and reaction in Revolutions. It made me feel as if I was an unfamiliar in the big city lost and confused. I don’t have any critiques for you.
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