Saturday, September 19, 2009

Response to Reflections by Becca

You really capture the essence of a setting sun on the water with this poem. As I re-read the poem, I was able to picture myself sitting on the deck at Fager's Island in OC, watching the sun fade into the horizon, coloring the water as you describe. I like the description of these colors on the water as "water dancers". A beautiful poem.

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