Takira's Response to Scott

I liked your story. It was interesting to read. I liked the story switch between the two groups of boys and then bring them together. It was very interesting that the young men would steal from their friend’s younger brother. I also liked the dialogue between the guys. The only thing that confused me was the switch in the beginning from the three young men to the two young boys. I would only suggest a better transition between the two scenarios. I really liked your story otherwise and look forward to reading more of your work in class and hearing it. Good job!