Melda's Review of “PHOTOGRATASTROPHE” by Adam Kite

I like how you realistically described the employees at the Photo-Shop. You stated that the girl at reception desk was dying of boredom and that the other girl, “practically [oozed] that sort of fake bubbly happiness that gets forced on most employee’s these days.” Also, I like the ending of the story as the grandmother was not mad at the “real” picture. She liked to see her grandchildren in real action behaving like themselves. However, I did not like that the main character did not grow at all. He remained mischievous as always.